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To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

I do NOT own The Big Valley or any of the original Barkley characters. Thanks to my Beta Reader, though all mistakes are my own. To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen Zeke sat on the porch of an...

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Yes, just how long will it be before those words come back to haunt Heath? I'm so glad that Nick was able to control himself. He has a family to take care of now.

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Great ending.

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Heath can try to run away but he can't be fast enough to get away from his family women deciding to find a right wife for him. Fortunately he can always count on his brother's help or at least is what...

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Lots of action before the happy ending for Nick and Abigal.  Is there a happy ending in store for Heath?  Or should he run as fast as his legs can carry him?rkm

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"Nick roared with laughter as his brother disappeared out the door. He wondered how long it would be before Heath had to eat his words." I think Heath is very far now!!!Wonderful story!

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The bad guys (and gals are rounded up and all's well in the valley.“Audra and Deborah have started looking for someone to match you up with.” “Oh no,” Heath jumped to his feet and headed for the door,...

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

I love Nick's family. I hope we see more of them. Thank-you for the story.

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

great ending to a great story and Heath just sealed his fate. LOL..Someone is going to catch up with him....PattiVic

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Whew! I was glad they got to Nick when they did, reminding him of his promise.

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

  First, I'm glad they yelled at Nick about his promise. Second...Heath....you can't run hard enough!

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Abigail! His promise! Nick snapped out of it, “You’re lucky I keep my promises!” he glared at the man in his grasp and hissed, then let him go. Zeke dropped to the ground holding his throat and...

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Glad all is well again in Barkleyland. Especially happy that Sue is going to face the consequences of her actions.Famous last words, Heath.

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Re: To Catch a Falling Star Chapter Seventeen (Finished)

Now why do I think Heath will be outrun sooner than he thinks?  Always great to end on a light-hearted note like this story did.  Well done.

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